4 关于主语后置的疑问

The unethical pursuit of profits by media practitioners, as well as the increasing popularity of the Internet and its devices, have all played a significant role in the phenomenon.

感觉主语太长了,想要后置下:

1.只会两种变形老师帮忙看下我改的对不对?

2.以及希望老师能帮忙在给一些变形方法。

3.另外再问下这个句子可以用倒装变形吗?

What plays a significant role in the phenomenon is the unethical pursuit of profits by media practitioners, as well as the increasing popularity of the Internet and its devices, have all played a significant role in this phenomenon.

All of this plays a big role in this phenomenon: the unethical pursuit of profit by media practitioners, and the growing popularity of the Internet and its devices.

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最佳答案 2021-09-28 00:44

如果这是你自己写的东西,觉得这样安排句子主语太长,你何不换一个结构表示类似意思。为什么要在play a role这一棵树上吊死呢?例如:

The major reasons for this phenomenon include the unethical pursuit of profits by media practitioners, as well as the increasing popularity of the Internet and its devices.

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  • Hervey 提出于 2021-09-24 18:31