两个并列结构的句子除了用and ,还有别的方法吗？一句汉译英句子的修改

请教各位专家一个问题：

通过自适应律的设计来消除参数不确定带来影响，通过反步控制的设计消除外部扰动。

我翻译成：

An adaptive law is introduced to reduce the parameter uncertainty and a backstepping control is adopted to eliminate the external disturbance.

这里我用and 来并列，感觉读起来不太舒服，有没有更好的方法。谢谢!

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最佳答案 2021-02-23 09:33

通过自适应律的设计来消除参数不确定带来影响，通过反步控制的设计消除外部扰动。

参考译文(1)：The influence brought about by parameter uncertainty is eliminated by the design of adaptive law,while the external disturbance is eliminated by the design of backstepping control .

参考译文(2):The design of adaptive law is employed to eliminated the effect/influence caused by the parameter uncertainty, while the design of backstepping control is employed to eliminated the external disturbance.

参考译文(3):The adaptive law is designed to eliminated the effect/influence resulted in/caused/brought about by the parameter uncertainty, while the backstepping control is design to eliminate the external disturbance.