Making repairs on the iron during the spring festival and reviewing the series and parallel circuits learned in junior school,which reminds me of the experience of hands-on physcical experiment.

请问这句话有语法错误吗?

该句作者想要表达的含义是:

春节期间修理熨斗,复习初中学过的串并联电路,这让我想起动手做物理实验的经历。

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最佳答案 2021-02-17 19:15

这是错误的句子,没有主谓结构。另外用词太啰嗦,不够简洁。修改如下:

Repairing the iron and reviewing parallel circuits reminded me of the hands-on physical experiments at school. 

或者:

Druing the Spring Festival, I repaired the iron and reviewed parallel circuits, which reminded me of the hands-on physical experiments at school.

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  • autohp 提出于 2021-02-15 18:47