作文中一个句子的虚拟语气应用

If I am admitted to the club, I would  like to be an actor so that I can decide  which plays we want to put on and perform in them.

若按照虚拟语气,am 应该为 were, can 应改为 could,此句是否应改动一下。谢谢!

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最佳答案 2015-08-18 15:15

这里无需改用虚拟语气。你之所以想改用虚拟语气,可能是受 would like 中 would 的影响。但实际上 would like 已是一个固定表达(表示“想要”,后接名词、代词或不定式),与虚拟语气无关。如:
I would like a piece of cake. 我想要一块蛋糕。
I would like to speak to the person in charge. 我想与负责人谈谈。
I would like to say a few words in this regard. 关于这问题我想说几句。
We would like you to come and visit us. 我们希望你到我们这里来做客。
Lastly, I would like to ask you about your future plans. 最后,我想问问你将来的计划。
Some people would like to see the death penalty come back. 有些人希望恢复死刑。
I would like a sandwich of sliced ham with cheese. 我要一份火腿加奶酪的三明治。
当然,如果要改用虚拟语气也不是不可能。那样的话,则表示这个条件是不太可能成为现实的(但根据句意,显然用陈述语气更合适,因为“我”肯定希望这个条件是可以实现的)。比较:
陈述语气:If I am admitted to the club, I would like to be an actor so that I can decide which plays we want to put on and perform in them.
虚拟语气:If I was [were] admitted to the club, I would like to be an actor so that I could decide which plays we wanted to put on and perform in them.
顺便一提,不知你的句子来自何处。感觉句子有两个小问题:一是句子的逻辑问题——作为一名演员好像并不能决定哪些地剧本可以上演,哪些不能上演;二是句末的 them 好像是多余的。

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