he is very old, Although he is quite strong 句子是否正确?

Although he is very old,he is quite strong.改写为  Although he is quite strong,he is very old。

If it rains,we will stop playing.改写为 it will rain,If we stop playin(假设自己是雨神)。

He laughed a lot when he was with me . 改写为:when he laughed a lot,he was with me. 

When I was at school,I loved history.改写为I was at school,when I loved history.

请问老师 自己改写的句子是否正确 不需要两个句子句意一样, 但从语法角度?

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Although he is very old,he is quite strong.改写为  Although he is quite strong,he is very old。
If it rains,we will stop playing.改写为 it will rain,If we stop playing(假设自己是雨神)。
He laughed a lot when he was with me . 改写为:when he laughed a lot,he was with me. 
When I was at school,I loved history.改写为I was at school,when I loved history.
你把主句变成从句,从句变成主句,也就是主、从句变换角色,这是完全错误的。尤其从句表示让步、转折、条件、因果关系时,跟主句是不能逆转的关系,所以,你的变换都是错误的,必须彻底还原。结构再对也不允许,它必须服从语义。

因为他病了,所以不能来上学。
因为他不能来上学,所以他病了。——这是什么逻辑?

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