Thought I heard a weird sound making in the engine on the way back,I didn't hear anything.
weird修饰sound了,加了个making是不是有点累赘?
原文出自《芝加哥烈焰》第二季第四集台词。原为对话:
A: Thought I heard a weird sound in the engine on the way back.
B: I didn't hear anything.
原文是没有 making 的。
你的句子结构有问题(句子间的逗号不妥),逻辑也有问题(怎么前面说听到了声音,后面又说没有听到声音)。先核对好句子再说其他问题吧。