1, It was his promise that he would visit me this coming Christmas along with the letter.
2, That he would visit me this coming Christmas was his promise along with the letter.
3, Along with the letter was his promise that he would visit me this coming Christmas.
第三句为原句,第一二句是我在第三句上变过来的不知是否正确,如果正确,请老师帮我分析一下这三个句子
Along with the letter was his promise that he would visit me this coming Christmas.
原句为主系表结构。由于主语带了很长的同位语从句,为了避免句子头重脚轻,主语后移,表语前置,形成了完全倒装句。你改动的二个句子都是错误,因为在你的二个句子中,along with the letter这个原来的表语无法交代。
所以,不要随意改动你阅读中见到的地道英语表达。你应该做的是熟悉各种表达方式,而不是根据自己的习惯随意改动原句。
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