without和but的用法

  1. 在北平即使不出门去罢,就是在皇城人海之中,租人家一家破屋来住着,早晨起来,泡一碗浓茶,向院子一坐,你也能看得到很高很高的碧绿天色,听得到青天下驯鸽的飞声。
         In Beijing, one imperial capita in ancient China, you can always enjoy a  high, crystal-clear sky and hear a chorus of domestic pigeons fleeting over your head,  without joining the crowd but making a cup of strong tea after getting up and sitting in the courtyard of a rented crude house.  请问老师,后半句中but的用法对吗?不对的话,句子该怎么改正?
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最佳答案 2020-11-22 23:07

but并列二个伴随状语:without介词短语和making现在分词短语。虽说介词短语和分词短语不是完全对称,但都是伴随状语,这是可以接受的。如果把这段文字做如下修改,可以令你满意吗?


In Beijing, one imperial capital in ancient China, rather than join the crowd, you can always make a cup of strong tea after getting up and sit in the courtyard of your rented crude house, enjoying a high, crystal-clear sky and a chorus of domestic pigeons fleeting over your head.

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  • cv 提出于 2020-11-22 14:17