在北平即使不出门去罢,就是在皇城人海之中,租人家一家破屋来住着,早晨起来,泡一碗浓茶,向院子一坐,你也能看得到很高很高的碧绿天色,听得到青天下驯鸽的飞声。 In Beijing, one imperial capita in ancient China, you can always enjoy a high, crystal-clear sky and hear a chorus of domestic pigeons fleeting over your head, without joining the crowd but making a cup of strong tea after getting up and sitting in the courtyard of a rented crude house. 请问老师,后半句中but的用法对吗?不对的话,句子该怎么改正?
In Beijing, one imperial capital in ancient China, rather than join the crowd, you can always make a cup of strong tea after getting up and sit in the courtyard of your rented crude house, enjoying a high, crystal-clear sky and a chorus of domestic pigeons fleeting over your head.