比较句改写困惑

原句：I must try to make as logical a survey as I can of this project which I have undertaken.

请教老师：

上句是否可以改写成：

a)I must try to make a survey of this project which I have undertaken as logical as I can.

或

b)I must try to make as logical a survey of this project which I have undertaken as I can.

请问，不考虑其他因素，如果单从语法上来说，a), b)都正确吗？

第一种改写是错误的。第二种先说定语从句，改写后使得结构非常松散。只有这样语序才是正确的：

I must try to make as logical a survey as I can of this project which I have undertaken.

本句含有比较从句，比较项是作定语的 logical。同样作定语，但语义要求形容词 logaical 在先，定语从句在后。因此比较从句也随之在先。所以位置不可更改换。

就像下面的句子一样：

This is a good idea which he put forward. （正）

This is an idea which he put forward good. （误）

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