HCE is the leading industrial disruptor, building and connecting software solutions to streamline and centralize the assets, people and processes that help our customers make smarter, more accurate business decisions.

disruptor改为distributor

building and connecting是非谓语成分，对前面提到的the leading industrial distributor作进一步描述

that定语从句，先行项为software solutions。但问题在于前面的to do目的状语把先前项隔离的过远，这样的话，这种表达就是欠妥的。所以我个人观点是这个that不如改为to，即

HCE is the leading industrial distributor, building and connecting software solutions to streamline and centralize the assets, people and processes to help our customers make smarter, more accurate business decisions.