5 语序与句式分析

刘老师您好,请问这句话从句子结构和语序的角度应该如何分析译文的好坏,谢谢您!


日复一日地上班下班,平淡的日子便如流水一般在指缝中溜走了。早出晚归的行色匆匆也令我无暇胡思乱想。

Humdrum days flow like water through my fingers as I go on daily trips to and from work—— early departure and late return in such a hurry that little time is left for me to indulge in fanciful thought.


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刘永科   - 教育出版集团英语总顾问 & 英语系列图书主编
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日复一日地上班下班,平淡的日子便如流水一般在指缝中溜走了。早出晚归的行色匆匆也令我无暇胡思乱想。

Humdrum days flow like water through my fingers as I go on daily trips to and from work—— early departure and late return in such a hurry that little time is left for me to indulge in fanciful thought.


网友的翻译很好,意思很到位。从语言表达多样化的角度,我试着用浅显的“诗歌” 语言,翻译一下,与网友共勉。

I go to and get off work day after day, 

and like running water the dull days slip away. 

Early departure and late return in such a hurry,

leave me with no time to think deeply.



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