想请问一下这一句话是否正确?

Clearner air may have saved 17 times more lives than those lost to the virus.这是我对economist原文的一个改写,原文是Clearner air may have saved 17 times more lives than the (official) number lost to the virus.请老师们看一下是否正确。

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最佳答案 2020-05-14 13:43

Clearner air may have saved 17 times more lives than those lost to the virus. (网友改写)

Clearner air may have saved 17 times more lives than the (official) number lost to the virus. (原文)

我的判断是:网友改写的句子错误。

错在 “参与比较的两个成分不对称” :

17 times more:指 “17倍之多的数字 ”

those:指 “生命;性命”

原文的意思是:

Clearner air may have saved lives which are 17 times more than the official number lost to the virus.

比较的基本要求是,参与比较的两个成分,必须对等、平行、对称。


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