介绍“中国剪纸”的英语作文评改

老师要我们写一篇介绍“中国剪纸”的英语作文，下面是我在网上找的一篇，请老师帮我评改一下，非常感谢！

Chinese paper cut has a long history of over 2,000 years. It can be seen in different parts of China. Many people, no matter young or old, are fond of it. People in northern part of China do well in making paper cut. They cut paper into different shapes, like birds, animals, flowers and so on. I think Chinese paper cuts are not only beautiful but also very useful. People usually put them on doors or windows when they celebrate something happy, especially for the Spring Festival. More and more people are interested in it.

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最佳答案 2014-12-16 09:50

下面也对你的作文提点看法，仅供参考。

原文句型结构简单，较高级词汇和短语的使用量不大，内容表达不很充实。修改如下：

As is known to all, paper cutting is a unique traditional Chinese folk art with a history of over 2,000 years. It can be seen in different parts of China, especially in the north, where people, whether young or old, are all fond of it. Many people there are good at this art and capable of cutting paper into different shapes, such as birds, animals, flowers and what not. It is believed that Chinese paper cuttings are beautiful as well as charming. Therefore, on red-letter days, people often put their favorite paper cuttings on the doors or windows to decorate the houses, and all the more so during the Spring Festival. Nowadays, more and more people are getting interested in paper cutting. Paper cutting art is one of China's folk intangible cultural heritages, which we have the responsibility and obligation to protect and inherit.