appear to reflect 中不能去掉，因为后面接行为动词reflect，使用的是appear to do sth结构，不是appear to be +形容词结构

Nor, if regularity and conformity to a standard pattern are as desirable to the scientist as the writing of his papers would appear to reflect（条件状语）,// （句子主干）is management to be blamed //（原因状语：介词短语充当）for discriminating against the “odd balls” among researchers in favor of more conventional thinkers who “work well with the team”.

把以上句子语序调整以下为下面句子

Nor is management to be blamed for discriminating against the “odd balls” among researchers in favor of more conventional thinkers who “work well with the team”if regularity and conformity to a standard pattern are as desirable to the scientist as the writing of his papers would appear to reflect

参考翻译：如果在科学家的论文中所反应出的对于标准模板的遵守和认同正是其所想得到的话，那么管理层就不该因歧视研究者中的"思维与众不同的人"，喜欢其中较为传统的"善于团队合作"的思想者而受到指责了。

第1部分句子整体语法解析

(1)if regularity and conformity to a standard pattern are as desirable to the scientist as the writing of his papers would appear to reflect 为连词if引导条件状语从句

(2)Nor is management to be blamed为句子主干(否定词提前倒装）

(3)for discriminating against the "odd balls" among researchers in favor of more conventional thinkers who "work well with the team介词短语作原因状语。

第2部分语法结构解析

条件状语从句：if regularity and conformity to a standard pattern are as desirable to the scientist as the writing of his papers would appear to reflect

(1)to a standard pattern 修饰regularity and conformity

(2)to the scientist为对象状语

(3)as the writing of his papers would appear to reflect，为as 引导的比较状语从句并在比较状语从句中做reflecte 的宾语。