Then I looked to see if anyone else was relished the golden glow of the sun, but everyone was hurry to and fro, most with their eyes fixed on the ground. 

以上句子应该把“was relished”改为“relished”修改后为下面句子。

I(主语）//（谓语） looked //（目的状语）to see //（宾语从句）whether anyone else （宾语从句的主语）//relished（宾语从句谓语动词）//（宾语从句宾语） the sun's golden glow, //（表示转折关系并列句连词）but //（主语）everyone//（谓语） was hurrying//（状语）to and fro, most with eyes fixed on the ground.

参考译文：我打量着看是否有其它人在欣赏着这太阳的金色光芒，但是人人都来去匆匆，大多数人的目光都只是盯在地上。

(1)relish vt.喜爱;玩味;欣赏;品味 

I relish the challenge of doing jobs that others turn down. 

我喜欢挑战别人拒绝做的工作。

He ate quietly, relishing his meal.  

他安静地吃着，细细品味着食物。

(2)relish vt.盼望;期待;享受

Jacqueline is not relishing the prospect of another spell in prison.

杰奎琳可不想再蹲一阵子监狱。

He relished the idea of getting some cash.  

他盼望得到一些现金。