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It is very convenient that online shopping allows customers who rarely go out to buy goods at home,as long as they have money.

老师,请帮我看下这个复合句语法有没有问题?

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最佳答案 2020-01-18 21:18

It is very convenient that online shopping allows customers who rarely go out to buy goods at home,as long as they have money.

该句存在逻辑错误。that 从句是真实主语,it 是形式主语。that 从句的内容本身不能是“方便的”——“网购让顾客购物”这个事实是方便的???”  应该是“网购对于顾客购物而言是方便的”。让网上购物作主语。

改为:

Online shopping is very convenient for customers who rarely go out to buy goods at home as long as they have money.


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陈才   - 英语教师
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It is very convenient that online shopping allows customers who rarely go out to buy goods at home,as long as they have money.

应该改为下面句子

Online shopping (主语)//gives/brings(谓语)//much convenience (宾语)//(对象状语)to the customers //(定语从句)who rarely go out to buy goods at home (条件状语)as long as they have money.

参考译文:网购给那些很少出门在家里购买商品/货物的客户提供/带来极大的便利,只要他们有钱。

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