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she added, pointing her wand at the misshapen canvas, which in one fluid motion rose into the air and settled, fully constructed, onto the ground before Harry, out of whose startled hands a tent peg soared,to land with a final thud at the end of a guy rope.

加粗部分的正常语序应该是什么?

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最佳答案 2017-12-16 10:11

she added, pointing her wand at the misshapen canvas, which in one fluid motion rose into the air and settled, fully constructed, onto the ground before Harry, out of whose startled hands a tent peg soared,to land with a final thud at the end of a guy rope.

网友误解了句子的结构,加粗部分的结构是唯一正确的标准结构,正常语序。

网友自己调整的结构是错误的,逻辑也是混乱的。

before Harry为介词短语作定语修饰the ground. 即哈里前面的地上。逗号之后是非限制性定语从句,对Harry作补充说明,before和定语从句已经没有任何关系了。

该定语从句的主语为a tent pen, 谓语为soared,out of whose startled hands为来源和方向状语(由于whose要引导定语从句,故提前至从句之首),to land with a final thud at the end of a guy rope为不定式短语作结果状语。

定语从句译文:一根帐篷桩从惊愕的哈里的手中飞了出去,最后噗地一声钉在了拉绳的末端。

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she added, pointing her wand at the misshapen canvas, which in one fluid motion rose into the air and settled, fully constructed, onto the ground before Harry, out of whose startled hands a tent peg soared,to land with a final thud at the end of a guy rope.

参考译文:她用魔杖指着那扭曲变形的的帆布补充说道。那堆东西以流畅的动立刻升到空中,并固定完全成型一下子便全部恰好落在哈利面前的地上,最后一枚钉子从受到惊吓的哈利手中飞起,噗地钉入到绳子的末端。

(1)before Harry做定语修饰前面名词the ground

(2)out of whose staerted hands..为非限制性定语从句修饰Harry

(3)which in one fluid motion..为非限制性定语从句修饰canvas

(4)to land with a final thud 作结果状语

上面的句子来自下面一段话

Apparently he didn’t want it back, his lumbago’s so bad,” said Hermione, now performing complicated figure-of-eight movements with her wand. “so Ron’s dad said I could borrow it. Erecto!” 

she added, pointing her wand at the misshapen canvas, which in one fluid motion rose into the air and settled, fully constructed, onto the ground before Harry, out of whose startled hands a tent peg soared, to land with a final thud at the end of a guy rope. 

“Cave Inimicum,” Hermione finished with a skyward flourish. “That’s as much as I can do. At the very least, we should know they’re coming; I can’t guarantee it will keep


请问老师:

这个顺序调整的对不对?

before a tent peg soared out of Harry whose startled hands to land with a final thud at the end of a guy rope.

你的理解不正确
主语a tent peg) +(谓语soared )+(状语 out of whose startled hands)+(状语 to land with a final thud at the end of a guy rope.) 

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