请判断以下句子对错,如果有错,请改正。
1 He wrote a report for two hours.
2 They saw him to be an imposter.
3 He spent two years living in Beijing.
4 Tom is the one who I gave some advice.
5 He is not the man who he used to be.
6 He seems in the bedroom.
7 He considered what he need a complete rest.
8 If the report isn't ready by tomorrow, you lose your job.
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1. He wrote a report for two hours.(正)
2. They saw him to be an imposter.(正;此处的 see 用于see...to be,意为“把……看作或当作”)
3. He spent two years living in Beijing.(误;宜去掉 living)
4. Tom is the one who I gave some advice.(误;宜将 who 改为 to whom 或在句末加 to)
5. He is not the man who he used to be.(正;但有的语法著作认为将 who 改为 that 或省略更普通)
6. He seems in the bedroom.(误;宜在 seems 后加上 to be)
7. He considered what he need a complete rest.(误;宜在 need 后加上 was。另 need 似应用needed)
8. If the report isn't ready by tomorrow, you lose your job.(正;比用 will lose 客观性更强,更具有威胁性)
1 He wrote a report for two hours. (误)
【改正】He has been writing a report for two hours.
【原因】write表示的动作,既可以延续,也可以不延续。在一般过去时或现在完成时的情况下,wrote 和have written 都表示“完成,写完”,动作结束,不再延续。所以,不可跟时间段for two hours 连用。write 的进行体可以表延续,但由于句中含有for two hours,故只能用完成 + 进行体。
以下表达都是错的:
* He wrote a report for two hours.
* He has written a report for two hours.
* He is writing a report for two hours.
* He was writing a report for two hours.
2 They saw him to be an imposter.(误)
他们认为他是一个骗子。
【改正】:They saw him as an imposter.
【原因】:see 表示“认为”概念时,其宾语补足语,不能由不定式充当,应改为介词短语as an imposter, as 表示“作为”意义。又如:
I see the job as a challenge.(来自朗文词典)
3 He spent two years living in Beijing.(正)
语法没错。本句等于:He lived in Beijing for two years.
4 Tom is the one who I gave some advice.
5 He is not the man who he used to be. (误)
【改正】He is not the man that he used to be. 或He is not the man he used to be.
【原因】关系代词在从句中作表语时,无论指物或指人,原则上使用that,不用which 或who,且that 可以省略。
6 He seems in the bedroom.(误)
【改正】He seems to be in the bedroom. 或He seems to be staying in the bedroom.
【原因】seem 有时可以直接跟介词短语,但这类介词短语是有限制的:表示人的情绪或抽象意义的介词短语,这种用法视为在seem 之后省略了to be。但是,如果是具体意义的地点,则要说seem to be ...。
又如:
The young woman wore a fine bunch of violets and seemed in high spirits.
这个年轻的姑娘佩戴着一束精美的紫罗兰,看上去情绪高涨。
来自英汉文学 - 嘉莉妹妹
Suddenly, with war on the horizon, the army seemed in danger of disintegration.
随着战争即将爆发,军队似乎突然面临分崩离析的危险。
来自柯林斯例句
【说明】以上两句也可以在seemed 之后加to be。
7 He considered what he needed a complete rest. (误)
【改正】He considered what he needed was a complete rest.
【原因】:此句语法正确,逻辑错误。consider接复合宾语,表示“认为某事怎么样;把某事看成是”,是对某事的一种评价或看法。He considered what he needed complete rest.实际等于He considered what he needed as a complete rest. 语义不通。
而consider + 宾语从句:宾语从句为系表结构时,表示一种事实。
例如:
He considers what I want is a good personal computer.
他认为,我要的是一台质量好的个人电脑。
They consider what I want to know is when the meeting will begin.
他们认为,我想知道的是会议何时开。
以上两句,consider都是接宾语从句,如果改为复合宾语的话,句意就有问题。
He considers what I want a good personal computer.
They consider what I want to know when the meeting will begin.
8 If the report isn't ready by tomorrow, you lose your job. (正)
说明:从句使用一般现在时表将来,完全正确,主句使用一般式或将来时均可:
If the report isn't ready by tomorrow, you lose your job.(必然性)
If the report isn't ready by tomorrow, you will lose your job.(可能性)
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1 He wrote a report for two hours.(表示完成结果的动词不可以接时间段)
正确:He has been writing a report for two hours.
2 They saw him to be an imposter.(结构搭配错误)
正确:They saw him as an imposter.
3 He spent two years living in Beijing.(正确)
=He stayed/lived in Beijing for two years.
4 Tom is the one who I gave some advice.(介词+关系代词使用错误)
正确:Tom is the one to whom I gave some advice.
5 He is not the man who he used to be.(who关系代词使用错误,应该用that)
正确:He is not the man that he used to be.
6 He seems in the bedroom.(结构搭配错误)
正确:He seems to be in the bedroom.
7 He considered what he need a complete rest.(结构搭配错误)
正确:He considered what he needed was a complete rest.
8 If the report isn't ready by tomorrow, you lose your job(正确)(强调必然性)
If the report is not ready by tomorrow, you will lose your job(正确,强调推测可能性)
曹老师观点
1 He wrote a report for two hours.(错误)(认可)
2 They saw him to be an imposter.(正确)(不认可)
不认可理由:see表示认为,把..看作,只有see ..as 结构,没有see..to be,
She saw him as a visionary, but her father saw him as a man who couldn't make a living.
She saw him as a visionary, but her father saw him as a man who couldn't make a living.
她认为他是一个有眼光的人,但是她父亲却认为他没有谋生的能力。
They have a normal body weight but see themselves as being fat.
他们体重正常,但自认为偏胖。
Others saw it as a betrayal.
别人认为这是一种背叛。
I don't see it as my duty to take sides.
我认为我没必要非得向着一方。
认为他是一个有眼光的人,但是她父亲却认为他没有谋生的能力。
3 He spent two years living in Beijing.(错误)
不认可理由为:(live 虽然是静态动词,可以转换为“短期含义的动态动词)
4 Tom is the one who I gave some advice.(错误)
5 He is not the man who he used to be.(错误)
6 He seems in the bedroom.(错误)
7 He considered what he need a complete rest.(错误)
8 If the report isn't ready by tomorrow, you lose your job.(错误)
理由:这句话可以是员工所说(推测),也可以是老板所说(必定无疑)。
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