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All of them showed my current situation perfectly,looks like they were designed for me specially.


请问这边逗号加looks like 是什么用法,感觉像省略了which但是这个which可以省略吗?

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最佳答案 2017-09-29 09:54

All of them showed my current situation perfectly, looks like they were designed for me specially.

请问这边逗号加looks like 是什么用法,感觉像省略了which但是这个which可以省略吗?

【答】这个句子有误,逗号后面的部分缺少主语。如果单纯从语法上改正的话,可以有如下几种选择:

1. All of them showed my current situation perfectly, which looks like they were designed for me specially. (用which引导非限制性定语从句)

2. All of them showed my current situation perfectly, and it looks like they were designed for me specially.(用and连接并列分句,it本身无意义,只起引导作用:It looks like +从句)

3. All of them showed my current situation perfectly; it looks like they were designed for me specially. (用分号连接并列分句,it本身无意义,只起引导作用:It looks like +从句)

4. All of them showed my current situation perfectly. It looks like they were designed for me specially. (两个独立的单句,it本身无意义,只起引导作用:It looks like +从句)

▲从句子的整体意思看,这句话的含义是:

“所有这些都完美地表明了我目前的状况,看起来,这一切就像专门为我设计的那样。”

可以设想这样一个情景:我在工作的各个方面取得了骄人的业绩,这一切都展示了我目前的情况,看起来,这些获得的成就就像我的专属。

注意:all of them 跟they 应该指“同一事物(成就)”。

如果以上理解成立的话,那么,使用which 就不合适。

无论which 指代situation 还是指代整个主句,定语从句的意思都讲不通。

所以,选择句2, 3, 4都正确。如果是逗号,那一定是漏掉了and it。

在It looks like...结构中,it是引导词,没有实际意义,它指某种情况或现象,所以本句应该使用it,而不是 which。

like 引导表语从句。在美国英以及非正式英语中,like可以用作连词,相当于:

1. as(像;按照) 2. as if (好像;似乎)。本句属于第2种用法。又如:

But it didn't look like anything happened when I clicked on the file. 但是,当我点击文件时,看起来并不像发生了什么。

It looks like Mary is too tired to walk on. 看起来本玛丽已累得走不动了。

It looks like the weather is changing for the worse. 看来天气变得更糟了。

It looks like it will rain before long. 看起来一会儿就要下雨了。

It looks like it isn't clean enough to bathe here. 看起来海水好像不干净,不能游泳。


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All of them showed my current situation perfectly,looks like they were designed for me specially.

looks单数形式提示前面省略了and it或which。完整的句子应该是:

All of them showed my current situation perfectly,and it looks like they were designed for me specially.

或者:All of them showed my current situation perfectly, which looks like they were designed for me specially.

Like用作连词是非正式用法,此处=as if/as rhough

没有哪本语法书或词典说可以这样省略。但如果句子没有抄错的话,我们就看到了这样的句子。这显然是口语体,不规范的英语。见过了,有个印象就行了。不值得模仿使用。



补充内容

如果大家查词典并注意词典例句,就会发现look like/as if结构有两种用法。

第一,相当于seem的用法,主语为非人称代词it(虚指it),这时从句的谓语多为为一般将来时态。意为看目前情况某事有可能发生(还没有发生)或有可能是真实的。如:It looks like they won’t be needing us anymore.

第二,主语可以是名词或人称代词,包括人称代词it,这时从句谓语多为过去时态或现在完成时。意为主语显示出某种表象。如:He looked as if he hadn’t washed for a week.

本句中,like后从句用过去时,因此,looks的主语可以是人称代词it。It指代主句的内容,改为非限制定语从句时则用关系代词which取代it。这是完全可以的。

以下为引自COCA语料库的例句:

 But I think they will find the experts that will say that despite all of those actions, which looks like someone does know the difference between right and wrong, there are a lot of other things that someone will look at to say this woman, obviously, has mental health issues.

The knights will perform canter pirouettes. They'll perform half-passes, which looks like they're going -- well, they go sideways.

 "I will go to my grave regretting the photograph of me in an anti-aircraft carrier, which looks like I was trying to shoot at American planes, " Fonda told O, The Oprah Magazine.

And now we've got through McNulty and the others possibly a gotcha of a video of someone coming out of the back of a tank, which looks like they're firing into the compound. 

以上例句中which的先行词有的是主句内容,有的是主句的一部分。


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