Resolutions are capable of being life changing or ,you mind,quite simple.Whether big or small,they will negotiate perilous twists and turns sometime and generate in me a remarkable sensation of adventure.(改编原句:Resolutions can be life changing or really quite simple.Whether big or small,they will affect your entire life )
老师,这两句话感觉怪怪的。不知哪里有语法错误?
老师,能分析句子的成分吗?
Resolutions are capable of being life changing or ,you mind,quite simple.Whether big or small,they will negotiate perilous twists and turns sometime and generate in me a remarkable sensation of adventure.(改编原句:Resolutions can be life changing or really quite simple.Whether big or small,they will affect your entire life )
这两个句子的语法都没有错误。估计这两句话来自一个写作教材,讲述如何清晰、准确、简洁的表达一个内容。第一句显然是一个口语体,措辞不够准确,有些啰嗦,绕弯子。改进后的句子简洁明快,意思清楚。第一句就不分析了。只告诉你generate in me a sensation中,generate是个及物动词,由于宾语长,状语短,就将in me这个状语移至宾语之前。
改进后的句子分析:
Resolutions(主语) can be (系词)life changing or really quite simple(并列的表语).Whether big or small(让步状语从句,省略了和主句相同的they are), they will affect your entire life主谓宾结构)
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