(1) In any event,my mother and her red pen showed me how deeply flawed a flawless essay could be.

无论如何，我的母亲和她的红笔带着我如何修改缺点，写出一篇完美的文章。

(2) Criticism, at its best, is deeply personal, and gets to the heart of why we write the way we do.

批评，处于最好状态是十分个人的，这也就是我们为什么要从心灵出发写作。

老师：您好！以上两句话我翻译的正确吗？如果不正确的话，烦请指正。谢谢。