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请老师帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有语法错误或者不妥当之处。

题目：

两个月前你获得了《设计与时尚》杂志的编辑职位，但是现在你发现这份工作与你期待中的并不相符，因此决定辞职。向你的老板王先生写一封信，告诉他你的决定，阐述你的原因，并且致歉。

我的作文：

Dear Mr. Wang,

I'm baddly grateful for you to offer me an editor job. However, I find this job not suitable for me because of the reasons below, and I decide to submit my resignment to you.

Firstly, though interesting is the work of artistic editor, I prefer to work in a research firem where I can acquire more useful knowledge and it's fitting for my physic major.In addition, working abroad makes me remember my family, my town and my country deeply,so I'd like to return my country and I will find a position in my motherland.

You've been a considerable and great boss all along, and I'm sorry that I will quit this job later.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

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最佳答案 2022-11-07 20:26

I'm extremely grateful to you for providing me with a job as an editor in your company.

However,I find this job is not what I expected as a result of the following reasons and I decide to hand in my letter of resignation to you :

Firstly, Interesting as an artistic editor’s work is , I prefer to work in a research team where I can acquire more knowledge which is of great help and use to me .

Secondly, working abroad for a long time will make me miss my family and my friends. So I would like to return to my country to find a job which is more suitable for me in my country.

Very sorry for any inconvenience caused by my sudden resignation! Your full understanding upon my decision to resign will be greatly appreciated.

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陈才 - 英语教师

擅长：中考英语,词法问题 | 采纳率 28% | 回答于 2022-10-29 22:49

5 英语作文批改

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