应该是可以的。语料库有类似用法的例句,另外,《薄冰高级英语语法》p 482页,也有相关解释:
1. “n+不定式”与“With+n+不定式”
Here are the first two volumes, the third one to come out next month.
是否可以改成:Here are the first two volumes, with the third one to come out next month.?
With plenty of homework to do/to be done, Tom will have to stay up tonight.
是否可以改成:Plenty of homework to do/to be done, Tom will have to stay up tonight.?
2. “n+现在分词ing/过去分词ed”与“with+ n+现在分词ing/过去分词ed”
Weather permitting, we are going to visit you tomorrow.
是否可以改成:With weather permitting, we are going to visit you tomorrow.?
The president assassinated, the whole country was in deep sorrow.
是否可以改成:With the president assassinated, the whole country was in deep sorrow.?
With the guide leading us, we got to the village.
是否可以改成:The guide leading us, we got to the village.?
He stood there, with his hand raised.
是否可以改成:He stood there, his hand raised.?
The boy was crying with the vase broken.
是否可以改成:The boy was crying,the vase broken.?
3.“n+adj/adv/介词短语”与“with+ n+adj/adv/介词短语”
She came into the room, her ears red with cold.
是否可以改成:She came into the room, with her ears red with cold.?
He came out of the library, a large book under his arm.
是否可以改成:He came out of the library, with a large book under his arm.?
With the door open, he left the classroom.
是否可以改成:The door open, he left the classroom.?
With the lights on, the building looks beautiful.
是否可以改成:the lights on, the building looks beautiful.
The boy rushed into the room with his schoolbag in his hand.
是否可以改成:The boy rushed into the room,his schoolbag in his hand.
时间有限,只说说你提的第一个问题,即不定式的独立主格结构的特点。这种结构在当代很少见,主要见于小说文体中,一般置于句尾,仅仅表示的是将来的意义(接着主句的动作发生)。
1.They hold monthly concerts, the money to be devoted to charity.
2.Books borrowed must be returned when due, the defaulter to pay a fine of 5 cents per book per day.
3.Mrs. Roden went to Poland yesterday, her husband to join her next week.
4.The caul was put up in a raffle, the winner to pay five shillings.— Dickens写过这样的句子。
那如果加个with形成with+不定式独立主格结构又是什么用法?这种用法当代就见的比较多了,一般表示两个意义:一是原因,二是伴随,这可能与with这个介词的意义有关:
5.With so many debts to pay off, he’ll just have to keep his nose to the grindstone for the next few years.(原因)
6.Miss Heythorp is below, Sir, with a carriage to take you home.(伴随)
也就是说加with和不加with表示的意义不同,这是不定式独立主格结构的很特殊的地方。一定要和你的第2,3个问题区别开来。
回过头看看你的问题:
Here are the first two volumes, the third one to come out next month.
next month很明显是表示的将来的意义,故不能改为:
Here are the first two volumes, with the third one to come out next month?
With plenty of homework to do(最好不要用被动式to be done,因为主句的主语是Tom,家庭作业是Tom要去完成的,用主动), Tom will have to stay up tonight.很明显是表原因,若换成:
Plenty of homework to do, Tom will have to stay up tonight?有两个问题,一是意义不对,上面说了。二是不定式独立主格结构置于句首几乎没有见到,而且置于句首的话如何表示“接着主句的动作发生而表现将来的意义”?我也注意到国内出的某本语法书上有这种写法的,但我个人不太认同,也没有在国外资料上找到类似这样的。
其他的2个问题相对比较简单,可以参考的资料比较多,论坛上我也提过,别的老师也有回答,自行研究就行了。
解答如下:仅供网友参考
【一】“n+不定式”可以与“With+n+不定式”替换【OK】
【1】with +名词(代词)+不定式(动词不定式表示主动或将来的动作)
With you to lead us, our group is sure to succeed.有你领导我们,我们组肯定能成功。
【2】名词(代词)+不定式
You to lead us, our group is sure to succeed有你领导我们,我们组肯定能成功。
【二】“n+现在分词ing/过去分词ed”可以与“with+ n+现在分词ing/过去分词ed”替换【OK】
【1】with +名词(代词)+现在分词(现在分词表示宾语正在进行的动作或主动的动作)
She stood there chatting with her friend, with her child playing beside her.
她站在那儿跟朋友闲聊,孩子在旁边玩。
【2】名词(代词)+现在分词
She stood there chatting with her friend, her child playing beside her.
她站在那儿跟朋友闲聊,孩子在旁边玩。
【3】with +名词(代词)+过去分词(过去分词和宾语构成动宾关系,且宾语是动作的承受者)
With the test finished,we'll have our summer vocation.考试结束以后,我们将开始暑假了。
With the job finished, we went home.工作结束后我们就回家了。
【4】名词(代词)+过去分词
The test finished,we'll have our summer vocation.考试结束以后,我们将开始暑假了。
The job finished, we went home.工作结束后我们就回家了。
【三】“n+adj/adv/介词短语”可以与“with+ n+adj/adv/介词短语”替换【OK】
He entered the room, his face pale.
=He entered the room with his face pale.
他走进屋来脸色苍白。
He sat in the front row, his mouth half open.
=He sat in the front row with his mouth half open
他坐在前排,嘴半开着。
The lights off, we could not go on with the work.
=With the lights off, we could not go on with the work.
灯熄灭了,我们不能继续工作了。
He rode a bike, hand in pocket.
=He rode a bike with a hand in his pocket
他骑着车,一只手还插在口袋里。
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