10 分析及翻译
stunted children do not do well in school. Down the road, those affected may not be able to get as good of a job as they could have, had they been well-fed. Sullivan added that it also prevents them from being able to contribute to society, and the economy, and they would have in a healthier environment.
原文翻译为：
发育迟缓的儿童在学校里表现不佳。如果这些孩子营养充足，他们本可以得到一份更好的工作，但是由于他们发育迟缓，未来他们可能不能得到较好的发展。沙利文又补充说，这也会阻碍他们为社会和经济的发展做贡献的能力，而且，他们本应该可以生活在一个更加健康的环境中。
我的疑问是：
①had they been well-fed 是不是 if they had been well-fed 的倒装? 如果是，那么这段英文我自己翻译的就不符合逻辑（如果孩子们营养充足，他们可能没法得到一份更好的工作）
②they would have in a healthier environment. 我没有见过 would have in 的表达，难道不是would have been in 吗.
求问，谢谢
最佳答案 2022-06-08 07:31
①had they been well-fed 是 if they had been well-fed 的倒装，属于虚拟语气形式。但它是修饰前面的they could have的，你的理解有误，as后半句应该翻译为: 他们如果吃得好的话，本可以找到一份好的工作。
② 你的这部分句子，我发现有问题，因此查了一下原文，发现有和原文不一致的地方，可能是由非母语的人改写的。请看原文：
It also prevents them from being able to contribute to society, and the economy, as well as they would have in a healthier environment, Sullivan added.
原文用的是as well as, 而你的句子改用了and, 不准确。这里的as well as 相当于as much as, 不适于改为and, 因为这里是同级比较结构。
我把这个句子补全：as well as they would have been able to contribute to society and the economy in a healthier environment.
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