3 现在完成时和一般过去时比较分析

My name is Jason. I was born in Los Angeles,California, 30 years ago. I have had autism since the age of 3, which means communication has always been a big problem for me. Like everyone else in the world, I have an up-and-down life,

during which I went through some of the journey that has been a rocky roadblock. It was very challenging to live through the times that I endured during my life such as struggling to adapt to the hard environment, helplessly observing my parents’ divorce and the struggle against my disability.

 

Despite all of those horrible obstacles that tried to defeat me, I would overcome them by writing poems out of my mind and heart. Currently, I work at a local library in Los Angeles,California in my spare time to get some money to cover the cost. Outside of that, I’m a writer, and I’m writing a book now titled Through My Eyes, which is about my life and the 50 poems I’ve written. Every day, there are new challenges I have to face but I will get stronger and more confident as I overcome them. I always live by the   saying made by Jim Henson. He said, “Life is meant to be fun, joyous, and fulfilling. May each of yours be that!” It was the optimism that helped me enter the university I had been dreaming of by getting the scholarship.

 

Follow your dreams by listening to that “whisper” inside your heart speaking to you. If you listen to the positive voice, you will make a difference. Look for the good each day. Repeat these steps every day, and you will become successful. Everyone has a story to tell and it is our duty to make the best of what life has given us.

 

请教英语语法网的专家老师:

1)这篇文章,看到网上有2个版本,分别是上面的黑体字:

        during which I went through some of the journey that has been a rocky roadblock.  另一个版本是 during which I go through some of the journey that has been a rocky roadblock.

        我个人认为这2个版本都是错误的从上下文来看,我感觉应该是:during which I go through some of the journey that is rocky roadblock.

2)看不懂这里为什么用would 是否应该去掉would,改成overcame过去时即可,对吗?

3I will get stronger and more confident as I overcome them - 是否应该是as I have overcome them ? 这里的as是随着...?还是当...时候?这里可否用whenwhile互换使用?为什么?

另外, that “whisper” inside your heart speaking to you - 是逻辑主语+动名词吗?

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最佳答案 2022-03-31 16:09

原文如下,比较长,我省略了一部分。

My name is Richie Jewell. I’m 20 years old and I have autism since I was born. Like everyone else in the world, I have an up-down life like a sea-saw. I went through some of the stuff that have been a rocky roadblock during my life. It was very challenging to live through the times that I endured during my life such as teasing, on and off depression, struggling to adapt in places including schools, helplessly observe my parents’ divorce and the struggles with my disability like problems with speech and language, communication, awkwardness in social situations, screaming and crying when I was young out of frustration. Well despite all of those horrible obstacles that tried to cut me down, I would overcome them by using my own set of coping skills: Getting through one day at a time, knowing that happiness and smiles triumphs. When I had no friends due to the disability, I pretended that my stuffed animals as if they were my own and practiced it for later on.

省略

Focus on moving forward through the future to live happily. We are amazing creatures with a powerful ability to overcome obstacles. Your life is your message to the world: Make it inspiring! Just like what I’m doing right now! My inspiration to this cause are my heroes of my life: Robin Williams, Jesse Saperstein, Steve Irwin, John Lennon, Rachel Joy Scott, God, Jesus Christ and most importantly, close friends and family. Every day, there will be new challenges that are gonna confront me but I will get stronger and more confident as I conquered them. I always live by a quote, made by Muppet creator Jim Henson, in order to continue my journey of life. And i quote: “Life is meant to be fun, joyous, and fulfilling. May each of yours be that – having each of you as a child of mine has certainly been one of the good things in my life. Know that I’ve always loved each of you with an eternal, bottomless love. A love that has nothing to do with each other, for I feel my love for each of you is total and all-encompassing. Please watch out for each other and love and forgive everybody. It’s a good life, enjoy it.” What’s my future have in stored for me after this? Well, who knows. I’m not a psychic and I can’t predict the future. The only thing I can do now is accomplish more speeches and keep writing my book so I would have a great future ahead of me. In order to be successful, I could try give the best advice which follows: Accept responsibility for your life. Know that it is you who will get you where you want to go and want to be, no one else. Reach into your heart and soul to discover your talent. Sometimes, people’s talents fade away and you lose something special so, hold on to it. If your talent or idea helps you, then let it set you free from the obstacles that are currently destroying your spirit. Follow your dreams and heart by listening to that “whisper” inside your head speaking to you.

1.  I went through some of the stuff that have been a rocky roadblock during my life.went through强调过去“经历”,后面用完成have been表明在作者写这话的时刻作者仍然认为是a rocky roadblock,就是说与“现在有关系”,一直到“现在”都是这样,用完成时很合适。

2.  Well despite all of those horrible obstacles that tried to cut me down, I would overcome them by using my own set of coping skills.

前面的分句用的是过去时tried,说明是指过去的背景下,而这里的would表示过去的习惯,情态动词用法,可译为“总是”,很常见的would用法。

3.  I will get stronger and more confident as I conquered them.

as表示“to talk about two situations which develop or change together.”比如:

The mixture hardens as it cools.
As we drove further north, the weather got worse.

4.  Follow your dreams and heart by listening to that “whisper” inside your head speaking to you.

就是listen to sb doing的用法, 是宾补。估计你是被介词短语inside your head迷惑了,“whisper” inside your head是一个成分

注意原文是head不是heart.

 

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