改错句——请问这句话中都有什么错误的地方呢?
It has been reported a great number of cases concerning racial inequality,such as in America a white policeman killing a black man screaming I can’t breathe by pressing his neck with knees,Asians being attacked frequently and so on.
It has been reported a great number of cases concerning racial inequality,such as in America a white policeman killing a black man screaming I can’t breathe by pressing his neck with knees,Asians being attacked frequently and so on.
1. 该句的主要错误,在于只有形式主语,没有真正主语。
2. I can’t breathe,这是screaming 的直接引语,不能与叙述的文字一样呈现。应加引号 “I can’t breathe”。
改为:
It has been reported that there are a great number of cases concerning racial inequality, such as in America a white policeman killing a black man screaming "I can’t breathe" by pressing his neck with knees, Asians being attacked frequently and so on.
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