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改错句——请问这句话中都有什么错误的地方呢?

It has been reported a great number of cases concerning racial inequality,such as in America a white policeman killing a black man screaming I can’t breathe by pressing his neck with knees,Asians being attacked frequently and so on.

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最佳答案 2021-09-28 10:15

It has been reported a great number of cases concerning racial inequality,such as in America a white policeman killing a black man screaming I can’t breathe by pressing his neck with knees,Asians being attacked frequently and so on.

1. 该句的主要错误,在于只有形式主语,没有真正主语。

2.  I can’t breathe,这是screaming 的直接引语,不能与叙述的文字一样呈现。应加引号 “I can’t breathe”。

改为:

It has been reported that there are a great number of cases concerning racial inequality, such as in America a white policeman killing a black man screaming "I can’t breathe"  by pressing his neck with knees, Asians being attacked frequently and so on.


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  • mianbao 提出于 2021-09-26 20:15

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