without和but的用法
- 在北平即使不出门去罢，就是在皇城人海之中，租人家一家破屋来住着，早晨起来，泡一碗浓茶，向院子一坐，你也能看得到很高很高的碧绿天色，听得到青天下驯鸽的飞声。
In Beijing, one imperial capita in ancient China, you can always enjoy a high, crystal-clear sky and hear a chorus of domestic pigeons fleeting over your head, without joining the crowd but making a cup of strong tea after getting up and sitting in the courtyard of a rented crude house. 请问老师，后半句中but的用法对吗？不对的话，句子该怎么改正？
最佳答案 2020-11-22 23:07
but并列二个伴随状语：without介词短语和making现在分词短语。虽说介词短语和分词短语不是完全对称，但都是伴随状语，这是可以接受的。如果把这段文字做如下修改，可以令你满意吗？
In Beijing, one imperial capital in ancient China, rather than join the crowd, you can always make a cup of strong tea after getting up and sit in the courtyard of your rented crude house, enjoying a high, crystal-clear sky and a chorus of domestic pigeons fleeting over your head.
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