Collective organizations immerse themselves to the virtues of collaboration and cooperation by reducing the hierarchy of social stratification on which traditional bureaucratic organizations rely. However,they encourage decisions to be made by the collective group to foster a sense of community and shared purpose.

    这道改错题中有两处错误，分别是①将"immerse themselves to"的"to"改为in。②将However改为Furthermore。

    请问可否将①中的to改为into，将②中的however改为moreover呢，moreover和furthermore有何区别？