日复一日地上班下班，平淡的日子便如流水一般在指缝中溜走了。早出晚归的行色匆匆也令我无暇胡思乱想。

Humdrum days flow like water through my fingers as I go on daily trips to and from work—— early departure and late return in such a hurry that little time is left for me to indulge in fanciful thought.

网友的翻译很好，意思很到位。不过，有的词语译得过于具体，例如，汉语的“在指缝中”是比喻，在英语中不必翻译出来，因为西方人未必能接受。

从语言表达多样化的角度，我试着用浅显的“诗歌” 语言，翻译一下，与网友共勉。

I go to and get off work day after day, 

and like running water the dull days slip away. 

Early departure and late return in such a hurry,

leave me with no time to think deeply.