1 请批改英语句子

想到一些句子,不知道对不对,老师帮我看看可好?

1.Jack is difficult to get on with others,but he is easy to communicate with me.

2.They have the same age as me. We are the same age.

3.This is impossible for me to finish it on time. 

4.Doing chores can exercise my living ability.

5.She is good at communication. She always gives me different advice.

老师,以上可这样表达吗?如果不对的话,我该怎么改呢?

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最佳答案 2020-05-10 22:47


1. Jack is difficult to get on with others,but he is easy to communicate with me. (误)

改为:

It is difficult for Jack to get on with others, but it is easy for him to communicate with me. 


2. They have the same age as me.(误) We are the same age.(正)

have the same age “有相同的年龄” 是中式英语,属于动宾搭配不当。

改为:

They are the same age as me / myself / I am.


3. This is impossible for me to finish it on time. (误)

改为:

(1)This is impossible for me to finish on time.

(2)It is impossible for me to finish it on time.


4. Doing chores can exercise my living ability.(误)

属于用词不当。不能说:锻炼能力;应说:提高能力。

改为:

Doing  chores can improve my living ability.


5. She is good at communication. She always gives me different advice. (正)


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其它 1 个回答

mikee

第5个也是错的,全军覆没了。

5. 将different改为good/excellent/useful/helpful之类。

我们说Tom and Jack gave me different advice。而你说She always gives me different advice. 这里的different只能理解为conflicting,这与前句She is good at communication是矛盾的。

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