3 翻译修改句子

The leading group of the new type of the coronavirus infection is unified leadership, unified command,and classified guidance to do a good job in epidemic prevention and control. 老师这句话对不对,怎么尽量保留原文的基础上修改?
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The leading group of the new type of the coronavirus infection is unified leadership, unified command, and classified guidance to do a good job in epidemic prevention and control.

错误百出的句子!

1.主语错误:新型冠状病毒感染领导小组(The leading group of the new type of the coronavirus infection):汉语错误,逻辑错误。——这个领导小组被新型冠状病毒感染了?

2.结构错误:The group is unified leadership, unified command, and classified guidance (领导小组是统一领导、统一指挥、分类指导)——这是一个领导群体,“人” 能 是 三个抽象名词吗?

3. to do a good job 多余,删去。

4. 把 in 改为 for

5. “新型冠状病毒感染”, 有专业的名词: novel coronavirus infection。


修改如下:(注意红色部分)

The leading group of the work against novel coronavirus infection provides unified leadership, unified command and classified guidance for the prevention and control of the epidemic.

【翻译】新型冠状病毒感染防治工作领导小组对疫情防控工作进行统一领导、统一指挥、分类指导。

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  • 晴空未屿 提出于 2020-05-05 22:39

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