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Attitude is everything

 

 To success, we need some conditions and some qualities; that is most of people's view. However, I think the right and positive attitude is the only thing we need to achieve our goal.

 Attitude reflects three things. First is one’s quality: for example, man who has a serious attitude to tasks mast be responsible and dependable, which we value very much. Second is one's ability that grasp the chance; it's obvious that man whose attitude is too casual can't find and take the opportunity. Third is one’s potential; no one born as a learned or skilled man, so we have to take through a long way before we can make things satisfactory; then there is the importance of attitude: only have a proper attitude can we learn well and grow fast.

 Besides, the change of attitude can changes our way to think: when faced with some problems, I always try to take a optimistic attitude, thus I can focus on what I will learn from them instead of loss. After all, people can work more efficiently when they set a goal to gain something.

 Because of the wide representation and significant effect of attitude, I think highly of it, and I agree with the old saying: attitude is everything.


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最佳答案 2020-03-10 14:33

Attitude is everything

Most people believe that we need some conditions and qualities in order to be successful.  However, I think the right and positive attitude is the only thing we need to achieve our goal.


Attitude reflects three things. The first is one’s quality. For example, a person who is responsible and dependable must have a serious attitude toward tasks, which we value very much. The second is one's ability to seize the opportunity. It's obvious that anyone whose attitude is too casual can't find and seize the opportunity. The third is one’s potential. No one is born as a learned or skilled man, so we have to take through a long way before we can make things satisfactory. The importance of the attitude is that only with a proper attitude can we learn well and grow fast.


Besides, the change of attitude will change our way to think. When faced with some problems, we should always try to take an optimistic attitude, thus we can focus on what we will learn from them instead of loss. After all, we can work more efficiently when we set a goal to gain something.


Because of the wide representation and significant effect of attitude, I think highly of it, and I agree with the old saying: attitude is everything.

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