本篇为自我介绍，麻烦查看是否有不妥之处。后附中文。

Dear professors, good morning

My name is XXX. I am a fresh student from Weifang Medical College. In this preliminary examination of entrance examination for Postgraduates，I am the second in the major I applied. I'm very honored to enter the second round exam and have a chance to introduce myself.

During my undergraduate course, I have a serious attitude towards learning, and my score is top 15% in the grade.  My college learning experience has improved my ability of independent learning and made me have a clearer understanding of my learning motivation.

I have also participated in student affairs, including organizing cultural and recreational activities and coordinating works. This experience has improved my communication ability and enabled me to cooperate with others better to solve problems .

I know that self state is the key to efficiency, so I pay attention to my state of mind and adjust myself through rational analysis, by this I can manage anxiety better and have a stronger heart.

I'm very interested in hematology and immunology, willing to devote myself to scientific research, and the contact with patient in my internship has deepened my sympathy for patients with blood diseases. I hope I can make any contribution to the progress of diagnosis and treatment of blood diseases, so I sincerely hope to become a hematologist.

If I have the chance to study for a master's degree, I will complete the study of clinical knowledge well, keep up with the latest research trends, improve my scientific research ability, and prepare for applying and studying for a doctor's degree.

Thank you for listening. I have finished introducing myself.

尊敬的各位教授，上午好

我叫XXX，本科潍坊医学院，应届生，本次考研初试成绩在本专业排名第二。我很荣幸能进入复试，有一个自我介绍的机会。

本科期间我的学习态度认真，成绩在本年级前15％，大学的学习经历提高了我自主学习的能力，也让我对自己的学习动机有了更清楚的认识。

我还参与了学生工作，包括组织文娱活动以及协调工作的开展，该经历提高了我的沟通能力，使我能更好的与人合作解决问题。

我知道自身状态是效率的关键，因此我关注自己的心态，并通过理性分析来自我调节，所以我能更好化解焦虑，也有更强大的内心。

我对血液学、免疫学很感兴趣，愿意投身科学研究，而且在实习中我与病人接触的经历，更加深了我对血液病患者的同情，我希望我可以为血液病诊疗的进步做任何贡献，因此我真诚希望能够进入该行业。

如果我有机会攻读硕士，我会好好完成临床知识的学习，并紧跟前沿研究动态，同时提高自己的科研能力，为报考、攻读博士学位做准备。

感谢聆听，我的自我介绍完毕了。