Pastry is a food made from flour, fat, and water that is mixed together, rolledflat, and baked in the oven.
is mixed 为啥?that的先行项是什么?
这个定语从句结构有问题。that的先行词无疑是 flour, fat, and water,但定语从句并列谓语不当。因为be mixed together的主语应该是复数,即flour,fat and water。但是后面的谓语be rolled flat and baked的主语显然不再是flour,fat and water, 而是dough了。所以这个定语从句逻辑错误,导致语法错误
修改如下:
Pastry is a food made from flour, fat, and water that are mixed together to form a dough which is rolled flat and baked in the oven.
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