主句和从句关系是否合理

Prior to 1792 those who wanted to wear the kilt in the lowlands or Britain had to join the British army. The reason being that because of the swift and competent movements of the Highlands armies, the English were afraid that if they let anyone wear the kilt it would spark the idea of revolution.

请问第二句话是不是存在语法问题?从结构上看“ The reason being that because of the swift and competent movements of the Highlands armies”是从句,“the English were afraid that if they let anyone wear the kilt it would spark the idea of revolution.”是主句,但是从句意上看这层主从关系好像不成立?如果确实有问题,那这句话怎么修改比较合适呢?

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最佳答案 2019-12-14 22:40

Prior to 1792 those who wanted to wear the kilt in the lowlands or Britain had to join the British army. The reason being that because of the swift and competent movements of the Highlands armies, the English were afraid that if they let anyone wear the kilt it would spark the idea of revolution.

就目前结构而言,第二个句子是错误的,因为句首大写字母到句末的句号之间,没有一个限定动词作谓语的主谓结构,而只是一个独立主格结构。改正的方法有二:1 将the reason改为小写,其前用逗号,则独立主格结构作前一句话的状语(补充说明)。2 将being改为was, 使其成为一个独立的句子。

1 Prior to 1792 those who wanted to wear the kilt in the lowlands or Britain had to join the British army,the reason being that because of the swift and competent movements of the Highlands armies, the English were afraid that if they let anyone wear the kilt it would spark the idea of revolution.

2 Prior to 1792 those who wanted to wear the kilt in the lowlands or Britain had to join the British army. The reason was that because of the swift and competent movements of the Highlands armies, the English were afraid that if they let anyone wear the kilt it would spark the idea of revolution.

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