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Firstly, the thermal conductivity of MC and SC at different levels of moisture content and dry density was measured after different number of freeze-thaw cycles. 

老师,是这样的,我投的文章要求修稿,简化语言,这句话我打算改成

Firstly, the thermal conductivity of MC and SC at different  moisture content and dry density was measured after different  freeze-thaw cycles这样可以吗?有没有更加简化的方式呢?


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最佳答案 2019-12-15 09:54

5.N-SING 单数名词含量;成分 You can use content to refer to the amount or proportion of something that a substance contains.


【搭配模式】:n N

Sunflower margarine has the same fat content as butter...


向日葵所制人造黄油的脂肪含量与黄油脂肪含量相同。


He was astonished at the high gold content in the 340 million-year-old rock.


他对这块有3.4亿年历史的岩石的高含金量大为惊异。



从collins字典,可知content是单数可数名词,应该不是属于零冠词的情况,所以我个人观点是 at different  moisture content 应该改为 at different  moisture contents. 参考来源是 google scholar中的 nature杂志,共有9条记录。既然nature杂志都有类似记录,我个人认为level of是可以省略的。


我之前也被审稿人要求修改语言(http://ask.yygrammar.com/q-33562.html),这是我一开始写的,


The relative contents of  five elements (C, N, O, Si, and Al) at surface depth of 3-5 nm were detected by using a Kα X-ray photoelectron spectrometer (Thermo Fisher Scientific, UK) with a monochromatic Al Kα X-ray source (excitation energy=1468.6 eV).

下面是找机构润色后的句子:

The relative contents of the five elements (C, N, O, Si, and Al) at surface depths of 3-5 nm were detected by using a Kα X-ray photoelectron spectrometer (Thermo Fisher Scientific, UK) with a monochromatic Al Kα X-ray source (excitation energy=1468.6 eV).


由上述例子表明,content在表示含量的含义时,是可以用复数的。另外,如果有条件的话,可以找母语者帮你润色一下,尤其是冠词的使用方面,一直是科技论文的难点和要点。


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