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The World Health Organization (WHO) says air pollution causes the death of seven million people a year and accounts for a third of fatalities from stroke, lung cancer and heart disease, with more than 90% of children breathing toxic air every day.

参考翻译:世界卫生组织称空气污染每年导致700万人死亡,这一死亡人数占中风、肺癌和心脏病致死人数的三分之一,并且90%以上的儿童每天都在吸入有毒的空气。


Account for(account for这里译者理解成“占比”)的主语是否应该是air pollution?但从参考翻译中看出其主语为the death of seven million people,这里是因为and后面省略了重复部分(the death of seven million people)吗?是否并列句里只要成分相同就可以省略,不管它们是否同时做主语或宾语?

 

如果account for的主语是air pollution,这里的account for可以解释为“导致,解释…发生的原因”。前半句译为:世界卫生组织称空气污染每年导致700万人死亡,三分之一的中风、肺癌和心脏病致死事件都由空气污染引起。

 

不知道我的理解是否正确,还请老师帮忙解答。


以下是剑桥词典查到的解释,因无法截图,就直接复制了:


account for sth

— phrasal verb with account UK  /əˈkaʊnt/ US  verb [ T ]

to form part of a total:

High-tech companies account for 32% of the total value of the payrolls in the area.

to explain the reason for something or the cause of something:

Rural Americans are often older than those in other parts of America and that may account for the slower adoption rates for internet access.


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最佳答案 2019-06-02 11:02

这是典型的新闻英语。

句子存在语病。不论air pollution,还是 the death of seven million people a year,对于宾语是“三分之一的比列”,都不能用accouts for 作谓语动词。

1.Air pollution accounts for a third of fatalities from stroke, lung cancer and heart disease. 

逻辑错误。空气污染不能“占...比列”,也不能导致“...三分之一”。


2.The death of seven million people a year accounts for a third of fatalities from stroke, lung cancer and heart disease. 

逻辑错误。主语表示数字,表语也是数字,之间是“等于” 关系,用is 足够了,对等数字不用accounts for (占...比列)。这样的句子才是对的:

Computers account for 5% of the country's commercial electricity consumption.

电脑占了这个国家商业用电的5%。(主语是“电脑”)



3. 改正办法:用关系代词which 代表前文死亡人数,用 is 换掉accounts for:

The World Health Organization (WHO) says air pollution causes the death of seven million people a year, which is a third of fatalities from stroke, lung cancer and heart disease, with more than 90% of children breathing toxic air every day.

【翻译】世界卫生组织称,空气污染每年导致700万人死亡,是中风、肺癌和心脏病死亡人数的三分之一,90%以上的儿童每天呼吸有毒空气。




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  • Kate 提出于 2019-06-01 23:32

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