下面一段话我用英语表达的有语法问题吗

下面一段话我用英语表达的有语法问题吗？

我在一家工厂工作，每天早晨八点上班，每天晚上六点下班，回家。

I work at a factory. I go to factory to work at eight in every morning. At six in the every evening, factory is over, I go home.

下面一段话我用英语表达的有语法问题吗？

Are there any grammatical mistakes existing in the following sentences that I wrote in English ?

我在一家工厂工作，每天早晨八点上班，每天晚上六点下班，回家。

I work at a factory. I go to factory to work at eight in every morning. At six in the every evening, factory is over, I go home.

修改为下面的英语句子

I work in a factory and I go to work at eight every morning . I go home from work at six every day.

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I work in a factory and I go to work at eight every morning. I come home from work at six every day.

一个句子，尽量避免使用重复的词语，注意选择不同的表达方式，学会句子表达多样化。