I get up at six in the morning. Then I have wash my face and brush my teeth. After that I had a quick beakfest. Next I go to school. I have four lessons in the morning. After classes is over, I go home. I have lunch at 12:00. I have three lessons to learn in the afternoon. I went to home at 5:00. I have done homework at home. Finary I go to bed at ten in the evening. this's all my a day.  （红色部分为错误或不足）

修改如下（尽量保持原样）：

I get up at six in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. After that I have a quick beakfest. Next I go to school. I have four lessons in the morning. After class, I go home. I have lunch at 12:00. In the afternoon I have three lessons to learn （本句把in the afternoon 提到句首，让句子富有变化）. I go home at 5:00. I do homework at home. Finally I go to bed at ten in the evening. That's my whole day.