请问老师，

多个长定语连用该如何表达？

比如，在多个定语从句后加一个 现在分词短语作后置定语，再加一个形容词短语作后置定语。

这有很多通过考试获得高分，且没有骄傲的学生。

there are many students who have passed the exam, getting a good grades, not prideful.

以上句子写的不漂亮，也不地道，应该改为下面句子。

(1)There are many students who are not bloated with pride though they have succeeded in passing the exam with excellent grades.

(2)There are many students who have succeeded in passing the exam with high marks but who are not arrogant.