我第一次在人群中瞥见你。

I glimpsed you (介词for不可以省略 )the first time in the crowd.

I (错误使用表示顺序时间副词first） glimpsed you in the crowd.

请问两句话都对吗？

解答如下：

参考译文如下

(1)It is my first time to get a glimpse of you in the crowd.

(2)This is my first time to catch a glimpse of you in the crowd.

(3)It is my first time that I caught a glimpse of you in the crowd.

(4)I caught sight of you for the first time in the crowd.

(5)I caught a glimpse of you for the first time in the crowd.

(6)I got a glimpse of you for the first time in the corwd.

(7)I glimpsed you in the crowd for the first time.

(8)For the first time, I glimpsed/caught/got a glimpse of you in the crowd.

(9)For the first time,I caught sight of you in the crowd.

以上句子语法结构分析如下

以上句子有1个主语，1个谓语，1个宾语，2个状语

主语：I（我）

谓语：caught a glimpse of （瞥见）

宾语：you（你）

时间状语(1)：for the first time（第1次）

地点状语(2):in the crowd（在人群中）

汉语思维：先说主语，在说状语，然后说谓语，最后说宾语。

英语思维：先说主语，在说谓语，然后说宾语，最后说状语。

备注：瞥见 可以用以下几个动词短语/动词词组作句子谓语进行翻译。

(1)get a glimpse of 瞥见；窥见

Crowds shouted and pushed to get a glimpse of their hero.  

为了一睹英雄的风采，人群喊叫着，推搡着。

He craned his neck to get a glimpse of the parade.  

他伸长脖子看了看游行的队伍.

From where they sat they could get a glimpse of the main stream.  

从他们坐的地方就能看见主航道.

(2)catch sight of  一下子看到; 看见; 瞥见; 见

I didn't so much as catch sight of him all day long.  

我一整天都没见他人影。

Don't let me catch sight of you doing it again!  

别让我再看到你干这种事了!

Every time I catch sight of myself in the mirror, I feel so disappointed.  

每次我瞥见镜子里的自己就觉得沮丧。

(3)catch a glimpse of 瞥见; 窥见

 He caught a glimpse of her in the crowd.  

他一眼瞥见她在人群里。

 She catches a glimpse of a car in the distance.  

她一眼就瞥见了远处的汽车。

Some of the fans had waited 24 hours outside the Hyde Park Hotel to catch a glimpse of their heroine.  

为了一睹女主角的风采，一些追星族已经在海德公园饭店外守候了24个小时。

我第一次在人群中瞥见你。

I glimpsed you in the crowd for the first time.