His work including climbing the tenth-floor building and delivering milk to people.
请问专家:这个句子对吗?
可以用 climbing the tenth-floor building 来表示“爬十层楼”吗?
谢谢!
二位老师各回答了问题的一半。网友问题为“爬十层楼”用climb the tenth-floor building是否正确。
正如刘老师指出,这个句子大写开头,句号结尾,却没有限定动词作谓语,因此including 必须改为 includes 或 included.
正如陈老师指出的,climbing the tenth-floor building仅表示爬第十层楼,可能2-9不用爬,而是坐电梯。这显然不是作者要表达的。另外,定冠词暗示只涉及一栋楼。如果这栋楼只有十层,则可说climbing the ten-floor building。如果该楼不止10层,但订奶的人最高住10层,则可为climbing up to the tenth-floor of the buildinig。
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His work including climbing the tenth-floor building and delivering milk to people.
【答】这个句子不对,缺少谓语动词。把现在分词including 改为includes 或included:
His work includes/included climbing the tenth-floor building and delivering milk to people.
可以用 climbing the ten-floor building 来表示“爬十层楼”。
后面的两个动名词短语climbing the tenth-floor building 和 delivering milk to people 作 includes/included 的宾语,正确。
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