这是一篇VOA新闻,文章链接是:http://www.tingroom.com/voastandard/2016/1/339639.html
以下是截取的相关段落:
1.新闻原句:
Good computer skills are desirable in today's digital age, and playing computer games can help children hone those skills -- as long as they don't overdo it, scientists warn. The British study involved 600 teenagers over a period of two years and found that those who played computer games less than once a week achieved better grades at school than ones who played them twice a day or more often. The study also found that daily use of social media did not affect school performance.
对于绿色句子的黄色部分(频率)进行提问,课本的原句问题是
Q1: According to the news, how often did the British study find that those who played computer games achieved better grades?
我觉得以上对于频率“less than once a week”提问的疑问句不正确,因为这个句子表明的是“英国研究多久发现一次?”。
我自己修改了句子,请老师们看一下是否正确。句子是:
According to the British study, how often did those who achieved better grades play computer games?
此句正确吗?严密吗???
2.新闻原句:
Parents increasingly complain of having difficulty getting their children away from computer games.
课本对这句提出的疑问句是:
Q2: What’s parents attitude toward playing computer games?
请问老师,parents 后面是否需要加一撇(’)变为parents’ attitude? attitude 用单数就可以?toward(美式用法) 和towards(英式用法)都是正确的?
3. 新闻原句:
The games industry has long claimed there is no proven link between games and addiction.
课本对此句提出的疑问句是:
Q3: What’s the games industry claimed ?
请问疑问句中可以用has的缩写?
非常感谢!!!
Q1: According to the news, how often did the British study find that those who played computer games achieved better grades?
这个问句确实不恰当。疑问词就宾语从句中的定语从句的状语提问,疑问词距离所修饰的动词太远,容易造成听话人或读者误解。正确的问句应该采用“非倒装问句”(原位问句--即疑问词保留在原处。这种问句主要用于法庭庭审以及竞猜活动的提问。)例如:
According to the news, the British study found that those who played computer games how many times a week achieved better grades?
关于非倒装问句,请参读我以前的一个解答:http://ask.yygrammar.com/q-25115.html
当然,你自己修改后的问句也是正确的,这是普通的特殊疑问句。这个问句包含的信息不如非倒装问句的信息完整。因此,有必要了解“非倒装问句”。
According to the British study, how often did those who achieved better grades play computer games?
Q2: What’s parents attitude toward playing computer games?
parents确实应为复数名词所有格形式。toward(美式用法) 和towards(英式用法)都是正确的。
Q3: What’s the games industry claimed ?
's可以是has, 也可以是is。所以这个问句是正确的。
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