你的老师说得对,“当我年轻时”习惯上不能说成As I was young。
因为 as 表示时间意为“当……时候”时,它所引导的从句的谓语动词通常是动作动词。如:
He dropped the glass as he stood up. 他站起来时,把杯子摔了。
As I was coming here, I met your brother. 我来这里时碰到了你的弟弟。
As people approach old age their energy may diminish. 人到老时精力可能减退。
As she knitted she kept the ball of wool beside her. 她织毛线时,总把一团毛线放在身边。
注意,as 引导时间状语从句时,其谓语动词通常不能是静态或状态动词。如:
她出生后不久父母双亡,是由姑母抚养大的。
误:Her parents died as she was a baby and she was brought up by her aunt.
正:Her parents died when she was a baby and she was brought up by her aunt.
但是,当 as 用于引导原因状语从句时,从句谓语可以是静态动词或状态动词。如:
As you weren’t there I left a message. 因为你不在那里, 我留了个信儿。